Ok i attempted to write a description for my 360 that i will be selling on ebay. Can you lemme know whats good and whats bad, and maybe if i need to add more:

Xbox 360 Elite Bundle!

This Xbox 360 Elite is around Six months old, Used rarely and never played for more than 2 hours straight. Never watched movies on it.

Comes with:

2 controllers, 16 games including the rockband package, microsoft ethernet cable 10 ft, and a 24ft ethernet cable and all HD cables.

Games:

Juiced 2
Rockband (game,drums,guitar,mic)
Amped 3
Skate
Two Worlds
Fight Night Round 3
Smackdown vs Raw 2007
Smackdown vs Raw 2008
Call of Duty 4
Rainbow Six Vegas
Need for Speed Carbon
GUN
Profect gothem racing 3
Saints Row
NHL 2k8
Need for speed undergound 2 (original xbox game playable on elite)

All have books with case and game except for Rainbow Six Vegas


also, i ahve no clue how to set up shipping

all help and advice will be greatly appreciated

sounds pretty good it the description, must around 25 buck flat postage fee for us

description is good. be sure to add pics of the games with the system and cables. for shipping just use teh shipping calculator, you put in teh box size, wieght and the furthest point(thats how i do it) so for you in pennslyvania put cali in the shipping est. it will give you an approx cost with each type of shipping. use that as your shipping price so that no matter what you will make sure you dont get ripped in teh shipping area.